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for everyone who needs to be by ~draecana:icondraecana:



if you were the stars,
then i'd be the darkness
just so i could surround you
in my embrace.

if you were the darkness,
then i'd be the moon
just so i could be near you
enough to comfort.

if you were the moon,
then i'd be a cloud
just so i could reach you
to kiss your face.

if you were a cloud,
then i'd be the sun
just so i could warm you
with my adoring gaze.

if you were the sun,
then i'd be the sea
just so i could reflect you
and show you your beauty.

if you were the sea,
then i'd be the wind
just so i could caress you
and skim along your surface.

if you were the wind,
then i'd be the trees
just so i could whisper to you
and sing you songs about forever.

if you were the trees,
then i'd be the Earth
just so i could nurture you
and nourish you with dreams.

if you were the Earth,
then i'd be the stars
just so i could shine for you
and make your wishes true.
©2008-2009 ~draecana
:icondraecana:

Author's Comments

Full title: for everyone who needs to be loved, i love you.

not too much to say. i suffer from this glorious affliction; i love. and for the most part, i love everyone i meet. without preamble, without hesitation. if you need a shoulder, a haven, a defender, a secret keeper, a moment without judgment, i would die to give it to you.

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:iconyouinventedme:
lovely sentiment

the first stanza is my favorite

xo!

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one half of ~ZombiesAteUs
:icondraecana:
thank you!!:heart:

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silent tears falling
unheard amongst the rustle
of wings come undone
:iconmisskelsee:
I love the underlying story of this.

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I'm not a photographer really, I just look at the world through a camera lens. <3

Anyone can write,
but it takes a special person to reach
out and physically touch you with their words.
- me
:iconprairiedaisy:
i suffer a similar affliction, though you are far more generous with your love than i am. :hug:

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:idea: epiphanies are the spice of life.
:icondraecana:
thank you.

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silent tears falling
unheard amongst the rustle
of wings come undone
:icondraecana:
:glomp: :blush:

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silent tears falling
unheard amongst the rustle
of wings come undone
:iconcrashhooligan:
this poem is very sweet.

i tend to be sort of a bleeding heart myself, except i'm usually too scared of people. so they usually just think i hate them. haha... =[
:iconkneelingglory:
I absolutely love the way this comes full circle, just like love. You've got a precious soul :heart:

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:icondraecana:
:heart: thank you!

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silent tears falling
unheard amongst the rustle
of wings come undone

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